Sunday, January 24, 2010

Reflection Paper (first draft)

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Tara Link

English 1010

Haley Stokes

24 January

Close Call

When I was a teenager my friends and I were trouble makers. Every weekend we would get together and think of something to do. As time went by it became a little harder to come up with ideas. This made it even more fun. We did pretty much everything together and we rarely got caught, but we had a few close calls.


It was in the middle of winter on a Friday night when my friends and I decided to have a sleepover at Haley’s house. Having a sleepover is the best way to cause lots of trouble. Kalie, Erin, Ashley, and I all slept over at Haley’s house. Haley’s three brothers Dane, Dillan, and Brennon stayed with us all night. We all decided that we wanted to go toilet papering that night. Haley’s three little brothers offered to pay for the toilet paper if we just let them come with us. We thought this was a good idea so they came along.


We went to Walmart to buy some toilet paper, because it is cheap there, and since his little brothers were paying we got a ton. The next thing to do was decide who we wanted to toilet paper. We decided on three people that we all wanted to do. The first was another friend of ours who we all liked to pick on a ton. The second was a boy that my friend Haley thought was cute. The third person we decided to toilet paper lived just down the street from Haley. A boy lived there that we were all friends with and he


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had a younger sister our age. We didn’t dislike any of them we just thought it would be fun.

We all went to the basement and pretended to be asleep so that we could sneak out. We went and did the first and second house and we did a great job. We destroyed their houses and still had a lot of toilet paper left. Just one more to go before heading back for home.

Finally we were on our third and final house. We were just about out of toilet paper, because it was all over their trees and everything else in their yard, when a car pulled up and shined their lights on us and honked a few times. We just thought that they were trying to scare us so we all just hid quickly. After about five minutes had passed the car was still there. We started to get scared and we knew we had to get out of there. We were all signaling and whispering to each other and we finally decided to go through backyards and make our way back to Haley’s house. We all finally got there and we realized that we had locked ourselves out when we snuck out earlier.

We didn’t know what we were going to do but we were all grateful that we got away from that car. We were all sitting in the backyard thinking of ways to get inside without getting caught when the car drove by and saw us. The car then turned around and shined their lights on us again. We all hid quickly again. We didn’t know what to do but we didn’t like that car. We started to make snowballs and we threw them at the car. While we were throwing snowballs we could hear sirens. They had called the cops on us. Right then we could see the red and blue lights and thats when we really freaked out. We were locked out and we didn’t know what to do.

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We finally decided at the last moment to try to stuff Haley’s little brother through the little doggy door that they had. We had to all push on his feet as hard as we could


and he finally slid through. We got inside just before the police pulled up. We were watching from the windows to find out what was going on. The police were wandering all around the house with their flashlights looking for us. After almost ten minutes of searching they rang the door bell. We all ran down to the basement and pretended to be asleep immediately. Haley’s mother woke up to the doorbell and answered the door.


The police officer had found some of the toilet paper that we had left behind and asked her “Is this your brand Ma’am.” Once she was out of shock she answered him “I don’t think so. Why?” He then asked if we were all sleeping over and she told him we were. Then she came down stairs to check on us and see if we were asleep. She told the officers that we were all asleep. As soon as the cops left we all came up laughing. His mom found out later that morning that it was us but to our surprise she wasn’t angry.


My friends and I used to always get into trouble but we were just kids trying to have some fun. Our friendship grew stronger and we gained more trust between each other during our close calls. We did everything together and we will always be close friends because of all of the times we have had together.

1 comment:

  1. Tara,

    I like the way you told this story. Your voice came through and it was fun to read. For your second draft, I'd like to see more descriptive details. Add at least one strong detail for each of your five senses.

    10/10

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